00:05:861 (6) - i feel like Ctrl+G goes better on this the pattern doesnt seems to connect well
00:06:477 (7) - kinda for this i feel like its better to follow vocals as you did on 00:03:190 (4) - it would be more consistent like that
00:40:381 (4) - consider moving this little bit more to the left to avoid the overlap between that note and 00:38:943 (9) -
00:56:614 - feels weird to ignore this beat dont you think?
02:22:299 (3,4,5) - consider stacking this with 02:21:478 (1) - since its like barely stacked probably broken stack
I would maybe recommend you to Map the first 2 kiais like the last one as it looks way better in the last one aesthetically in the last one u mostly avoided Overlaps or weird transitions!
04:05:861 (6) - ctrl G would go better with the pathing
Consider Tags for Language Genre nd maybe some subtags if u really feel like it