cocoamallows wrote:
@cloudpaw
i forgor 💀 busy for the next few days, remind me monday
Index » Beatmaps » Ranked/Approved Beatmaps » Camellia - Xeroa
| 25 posts | Jump | 1 2 |
This topic is linked to a beatmapset.
Click here to view it!
|
No kudosu yet. |
i forgor 💀 busy for the next few days, remind me monday it/its only
|
|
Earned 1 kudosu. |
nitpick 00:13:590 (1) - you could end the spinner on the red tick so it aligns with the end of the piano melody in bg 00:57:643 - you end up ignoring a pretty prominent sound in the rhythm here, try circle spaced like this for the pattern  01:10:002 (1) - this spinner should really end on 01:10:998 - , doesn't make sense to end it in the middle of the whisper ( you also ended it before the whisper at 01:32:527 (1) - ) 01:14:287 - to 01:14:885 - I think the rhythm can be improved here to be more active with a stacked circle on 01:14:437 (2) - and 01:14:835 (5) - (doubles rhythm) 01:14:686 (5,6,7) - you should space these a little closer together to match the intensity of the synth lowering 01:14:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think the structure of this could be a lot better to match the symmetry throughout the map, some of the overlaps and placements here are awkward for aesthetic. here's my idea  with the doubles slider there spaced closer together / moved down one, then you get this cool symmetry with 1 -> 4 in the burst, 1 -> 10, 789, and 11 in the center overlapping end with 01:16:181 (5) - 01:17:477 (1,2,3) - 01:17:676 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g these to match the melody going down in pitch to going up in pitch oops I accidentally sent early 💀 making a second post
Last edited by Cloudpaw
3 days ago, edited 3 times in total.
it/its only
|
|
No kudosu yet. |
01:21:164 (7) - I really feel like there should be a triple here, or at least a repeating 1/4 slider for the triple rhythm
01:27:643 - circle here?  01:38:307 (1) - similar rhythm thing, there's a notable sound on the red tick right after so I think a 1/2 slider would fit here nicely 00:43:889 (5,6,7,8) - nc to match ncs for rhythm change? 💖 01:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - I'll do a pass for HS soon™ it/its only
|
|
No kudosu yet. |
01:23:457 (7,8,9) - oh this is wrong
it/its only
|
|
Rhythm Incarnate
546 posts
No kudosu yet. |
at this point you can change mapper nickname on your own
|
|
|
00:13:590 (1)01:10:002 (1) - yep (spinners)
01:27:643 (5) - yep (circle) 01:21:164 (7)01:38:307 (1) - yep (sliders) 01:14:287 - copied your picture over i liked that better 👍 01:23:457 (7,8,9) - fixed 00:57:643 - took your circle placement + removed the nc to be consistent with the rest of the section; if the combo is too long now I think breaking these rhythms up is better though 01:17:277 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+g ing a triple earlier for symmetry 00:43:889 (5,6,7,8) - spacing communicates the rhythm well enough I think but if other people disagree then I can nc it ty for feedback :D |
|
|
this is what we call a certified Cloudpaw nomination (for ranked)
Last edited by Cloudpaw
3 days ago, edited 1 time in total.
it/its only
|
|
No kudosu yet. |
gg new hardest ranked titanic map
 |
|
No kudosu yet. |
vetoed i wanna make a normal diff /j
furry
|
|
No kudosu yet. |
^ bro think he NOT A WEEB
|
| 25 posts | Jump | 1 2 |
Users browsing this forum:
None