Index » Beatmaps » Ranked/Approved Beatmaps » Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary (TV Size)

• Celerrin's Hard (4.87 stars, 294 notes)
  
• Normal (4.38 stars, 160 notes)
  
• Soccs' Insane (5 stars, 346 notes)
  

Kurboh wrote:

mod posts, it's been too long :p

Normal:
- make stack leniency 7 pls, some stacks look bad with 10
- 00:23:417 (3,4) - i think you should remove the circle and extend the slider, i think it represents song better
- 00:32:533 (3,4) - maybe switch places between the circle and slider (so slider first, then circle)
- 00:43:472 (6) - maybeee shorten the slider by half a tick and add a circle where the slider end originally was
- 01:04:356 (6) - make this a circle pls? as it is now, it feels awkward and the slider end doesn't really represent anything i think

Insane:
- uhh, it seems fine, i can't really mod modern maps ^^;

everything else seems good :p

• [!] You should put "TV Size" on the title marker instead of on tags, so it would be:
  > Souzou Diary (TV Size)
  
  
• Add "Ichijou Raku 一条楽 桐崎千棘 小野寺小咲 鶫誠士郎 橘万里花 jpop j-pop pop 8 ed8 female vocal" to the tags, everything listed on my suggestions there is their Japanese letters of the characters name and several additional things u should add as well
  

• 00:44:301 (8) - would replace this circle with slider that ended on 00:44:633, and add a circle on 00:44:798, the way you emphasize 00:44:798 - this with passive rhythm is pretty weird because there's a prominent vocal sound right there that i think should be emphasized actively, like u did on 00:40:323 (5,1) - tbh
  

• [!] rhythm is kinda pretty dense for a calm part on 00:16:953 - to 00:25:903, it just lack contrast between the calm part and intense part of the song tho, i would recommend to tone down the rhythm intensity on this part
  
  the solution to this is by removing 00:17:782 (5) - this slider, and then extend the sliderend on 00:17:450 (4) - to 00:17:782, and then remove 00:18:776 (2) - so we can have some rhythm gap for some short break in between the rhythm
  
  next step is to remove 00:23:749 (2) - and then extend 00:23:749 (2) - this sliderend to 00:23:749
  
  lastly, remove 00:24:246 (4,5) - and then extend 00:23:914 (3) - this sliderend to 00:24:246 -
  
  
• 00:41:152 (2) - thought on removing this? i just don't think this object represents anything on the song itself a.k.a there's literally no audible sounds can be heard there
  
  
• 00:51:428 (4) - would be cool to NC this to show that this is the start of the kiai
  
  
• 01:12:644 (4) - NC this
  

• 00:15:627 (5) - would NC this
  
  
• 00:39:826 (6) - make this a circle and add a 1/2 slider on 00:39:992, rhythm kinda similar like 00:42:478 (3,4) - tbh, that would emphasize better for 00:39:992 - with active rhythm i think
  
  
• 00:51:428 (4) - like hard diff, would NC this to show that this is the first object that appears on the kiai
  
  
• 00:57:727 (4) - this rhythm feels underemphasized tho, would replace 00:57:727 (4) - with a circle and add a 1/2 slider on 00:57:892 -

• [!] this is the only diff that ended on 01:28:887 - while the other 2 diffs above not, it feels inconsistent tbh
  
  would just remove 01:27:064 (9) - this and extend 01:25:738 (8) - this slidertail on 01:27:064 -
  or
  making the 2 others diff above following what Normal diff did by mapping them until 01:28:887 -
  

arutama wrote:

mod for Normal diff

• [!] this is the only diff that ended on 01:28:887 - while the other 2 diffs above not, it feels inconsistent tbh
  
  would just remove 01:27:064 (9) - this and extend 01:25:738 (8) - this slidertail on 01:27:064 -
  or
  making the 2 others diff above following what Normal diff did by mapping them until 01:28:887 -
  

that's all