kyaaa this map is so cute (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶) ‹𝟹
dropping by with an unannounced mod, hope you dont mind~
Metadata:
looks fine to me, great work~
here's a marginally higher quality version of your background image, if you are interested. Easy:
00:03:114 (1) - i would have this slider start at
00:03:387 - ideally, the common theme in this difficulty is that this slider starts at the prominent vocal of the downbeat rather than the beginning of the vocal phrase (see
00:09:933 -
00:12:114 -
00:14:296 - etc) and this one comes at a bit of a surprise
00:08:842 - circle here doesnt hurt to finish off the measure~
00:23:024 (7) - i think the small 1/2 slider into a circle is really nice on the previous measure
00:18:660 (1,2) -, i like how it creates new rhythm on the new section of music, you may like to do it here also~
00:35:024 - a small 1/2 slider going into the circle at
00:35:569 (10) - would fit very sweetly, currently the ending is quite underwhelming with the large 3 beat gap.
Normal:
00:03:114 (1) - i have a similar issue ass to what i described on easy, if you would like, you could place a circle here and move the 1/2 slider to start at
00:03:387 -, this rhythm would fit well
00:03:933 (2) - the 3/4 slider should be extended to a full beat, i think its more effective in capturing the rhythm this way~
00:27:933 (2) -
00:30:114 (5) - should also be turned into 1/1 sliders as per what i mentioned above^^, but in addition, theres a bit of a reading predicament here.
notice the spacing between the two sliders
00:27:933 (2,3) - about 0.5x spacing (you can see this at the top right of your screen). the rhythm is 3/4, which is a larger rhythm gap than the immediate next sliders
00:28:751 (3,4) - yet these sliders have a larger spacing (0.9x). in our normal diffs, we wish to equate spacing directly to the rhythm, for our dear new players to be able to intuitively tell the difference between certain rhythms visually, rather than relying solely on approach circles.
you can apply time-distance equality through the use of distance snap - i highly recommend this!! eyeballing visual note distances may lead to slight errors if you are not highly experienced (and even then, it takes longer.)
Hard:
i will not heavily suggest rhythm changes here as to not overwhelm your own choices ( ˶°ㅁ°)
but, i can't get past how the rhythm density for the beginning section
00:01:205 - to
00:08:842 -, and the immediate section afterward
00:09:933 - to
00:17:569 - are near identical. in terms of lyrical density, yes it is unchanged, but the song notably picks up here, and our beatmapping should reflect that to be effective.
my suggestion would be to perhaps place circles after these 1/4 sliders? as in,
00:10:751 (3) - would have a circle placed at
00:11:024 -
i personally feel as though having each vocal phrase end on a passive mapping (sliderend) is quite underwhelming and not as enjoyable to play (i enjoyed how your insane difficulty did it a lot better!), so this makes it a bit more engaging and thus, hopes to reflect the song changes.
Insane:
i wont mod this difficulty, as so not to overwhelm you :P
my one suggestion may be to enlargen this sliderbody
00:29:569 (3) - a bit, or otherwise find a way to not make the sliderhead and tail not directly overlapping - this can 100% cause reading issues.
hope you find these suggestions to be helpful~