Index » Beatmaps » Pending Beatmaps » Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta (TV Size)

• harumi hs (2.46 stars, 231 notes)
  
• Harumi's Intermediate (1.78 stars, 115 notes)
  
• Kurboh's Advanced (2.34 stars, 108 notes)
  
• Novice (1.47 stars, 80 notes)
  
• Rin's Pro (3.89 stars, 200 notes)
  

• 00:21:438 (3) - 00:35:251 (4) - Replacing either to a straight slider or a curve would work better. Linear slider at these context felt special in visual, though the song didn't really changed that much for such decision.
  
• 00:33:956 (4,1) - Would be better if the NC starts from (4) along the lyric & the strong sound.
  
• 00:53:812 (5,1) - Try avoiding this overlap for a better visual.
  
• 01:09:784 (4) - You forgot NC here where the section changes. Also would remove NC at 01:11:942 (1) - for consistency afterwards.
  

• 00:55:107 (4,5,1) - Can you try starting the NC from (4) along the lyrics? That's what you were doing at 00:41:294 (1,2,3) - so it should be better in consistency.
  
• 00:57:266 (3,4,5) - Can you try making the spacing even? Seems the intention was to keep the x-axis the same for (3,4) but the unbalanced spacing didn't made it work well.
  
• 01:11:942 (1) - 01:16:258 (1) - 01:20:791 (1) - I'd personally remove these NCs since they all belong to the same combo but it's up to you.
  
• 01:15:827 (4,3) - This overlap hurts at old skin but w/e
  
• 01:25:107 (3) - Why is this slider non-symmetric?

Sonnyc wrote:

- NC of the kiai is pretty random, would be nice if you can review the overall NC logic yourself. Agreed, NC logic was all over the place. I hastily remapped it at some point to try to get it to be lower SR than harumi's diff and never reworked it. Should be better now.
- You should try focusing more on the playfield usage being well spread. Overall, the cursor movement feels like it's mostly moving around the center which leaved the corner potential unused. I fully agree that object placement is weak in this difficulty. Reworked some, still not amazing though.
- The intro section (00:17:122 ~ 00:38:273) could show more rhythm variation to express the song as it's mostly a chain of 1/1 beats right now. 00:32:661 (3) - was a good example where you combined a 2/1 slider so things aren't all metronome beats. It's important to design a combination of various rhythms instead of just plainly following audible sounds of the song, or unless the map ends up with the same beats over and over especially for low diffs. I understand that you want more rhythm variation, my goal was just to follow the vocals, and have some gaps in rhythm since it's a low diff. Honestly I am at a bit of loss on how I could vary the rhythms up more, still follow the vocals, and have the gaps I desired originally for this low diff.

• 00:21:438 (3) - 00:35:251 (4) - Replacing either to a straight slider or a curve would work better. Linear slider at these context felt special in visual, though the song didn't really changed that much for such decision. Yep this was just a silly slider. It's now a curved bezier
  
• 00:33:956 (4,1) - Would be better if the NC starts from (4) along the lyric & the strong sound. 100% agree, done.
  
• 00:53:812 (5,1) - Try avoiding this overlap for a better visual. After some convincing I got Hexis grid snap to work with me, and now it looks better lol.
  
• 01:09:784 (4) - You forgot NC here where the section changes. Also would remove NC at 01:11:942 (1) - for consistency afterwards. I reworked the NC's across the map :D
  

iSlodinx wrote:

Hello, i'll be modding this set and i'll be your 1st nominator.

General:
- Would be nice if you could add kiai on all diffs maybe? starting from 00:42:158 - to 01:09:784 - I prefer not to, breaks on older clients

Kurboh's Advanced:
- 01:05:465 - Object's end is slightly unsnapped! Off by -2ms. Mapset Verifier does not say this, and Digital Client AiMod does not either, so I don't know where you are getting this from