Parry Gripp - I'm a crazy weirdo & I'm calling you! {RINGTONE}

hello! just gonna say that this map isn't rankable due to the length of the song being too small, but i'll mod it anyway for future reference when you try to map for rank :p

General

timing of the song isn't right, here's what it should be:
00:00:000 - 118,75 BPM
00:19:847 - 115,00 BPM
-> don't forget to resnap notes afterwards
neither of the difficulties have a preview point (it's the part of the song that plays when you check the map on the website or on osu!direct), to add it, go to the part of the song where you want the preview to start, then on the top bar for options: Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point
the combo colours you chose aren't good, specifically, don't use pure black or pure white as combo colours (so colour 1 and colour 4 in your case), the two other colours are fine
the tags in the map aren't all right, there's some missing and some that shouldn't be there. here's what you should put: "novelty english boonebum animation meme 2013"
you should also remove "Boonebum" from source
the song title should not have "{RINGTONE}" in the title and most of the letters in this case should be capitalized, change the song title to "I'm A Crazy Weirdo And I'm Calling You"
this is specific to titanic, but due to some older clients not having automatic lead-in time (the time before a song starts), you'll need to add at least 1300ms of audio lead-in time to your Insane difficulty and 1000ms to your Normal difficulty as they have notes that appear right at the start of the song (you can find this option in Song Setup under the Audio options)

Normal

there are many cases where i would suggest you add new combos (aka NC's), here are a couple spots
-> 00:04:250 (4) -
-> 00:06:251 (7) -
-> 00:08:529 (10) -
-> 00:12:319 (4) -
-> 00:14:593 (7) -
-> 00:17:120 (2) -
-> 00:18:131 (5) -
i would also remove new combo from 00:16:110 (1) - this one
00:03:249 (2) - this feels kinda too close to both 00:02:498 (1,3) - these, so i would move the circle more to the left so it doesn't overlap (like x:56 y:168, you'll see these numbers on the top right in the editor, below Beat Snap Divisor)
00:04:250 (4) - 00:10:045 (12) - for a normal difficulty, i would not suggest you do reverses with sliders this short (1/4), also it's kinda too close to 00:03:499 (3) -
00:07:009 (8) - this slider's head is spaced too far from 00:06:251 (7) - this slider's end, so here's a quick solution to fixing that
00:12:319 (4) - this slider starts too early, would remove a reverse and start it at 00:12:572 - as that's when the next vocal starts
00:13:077 (5,6,7,8) - this feels contradictory to the vocals, so i'd remove a reverse from 00:13:077 (5) - then move the 00:13:583 (6,7,8) - all these sliders half a beat early at 00:13:583
00:17:626 (4,5) - the spacing between these two is a bit ridiculous for a normal, would move them closer together

Insane

sliders feel too fast for the spacing you do in some objects, and due to the timing changes that you'll apply, the slider speed should be slower, so when that's done, resnap the sliders to fit the rhythm you had before. it may take a lot of work to do this and sliders won't turn out the same, but it'll end up better in the end. in case you need to, increase the slider velocity a little too
here's more NC suggestions:
-> 00:04:359 (7) -
-> 00:08:307 (5) -
-> 00:10:328 (10) -
-> 00:12:459 (5) -
-> 00:14:590 (10) -
-> 00:17:868 (5) -
-> 00:18:632 (9) -
00:04:359 (7,8) - the spacing between these two is really small and awkward, a player will hit 00:04:741 (8) - too early… there's many such cases in this map
-> 00:06:270 (1,2) -
-> 00:08:307 (5,6) -
-> 00:10:077 (9,10) -
-> 00:10:328 (10,11) -
-> 00:14:088 (9,10) -
00:02:730 (1) - would shorten this slider to end on 00:02:979 - to better match with vocals
00:06:270 (1) - i feel like this slider should start at 00:06:524 - as that's where the 2 is mentioned and the long vocals happens. if you do that, add a circle on 00:06:270 - to fill that space
00:10:328 (10,11) - for this, i would move them both a full beat later, to 00:10:578 - to better match vocals better
beyond that, i won' mod further cuz i wanna see how this difficulty will look after the mods are applied as it's a little difficult to explain all the rhythm related stuff i wanna say

that shoud be everything for now, hope you understand everything, and if you need further assistance, please ask me! c:

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