Hi basil! :D
Okay, so I've checked your map and while there is massive improvement when it comes to mapping overall but they are places that need a rework or a little changes.
Before I'll move to details, I must warn that might be a lot of things pointed by me and others, so pls don't be discourage with the amount of things that can be improved. :)
Also a short explanaition:
"->" - indicates a change in Song Setup section value of one value to another
"-" - used to indicate <begin timelapse> and <ending timelapse> to include a whole pattern/part of a map
Overall problems:
When it comes to Overall difficulty, I assume you are going with Insane/Extra diff when it comes to difficulty right? So I would suggest to increase OD from
OD (5) -> OD (7-8) in that case.
HP Drain Rate is too small for such a challenging map, that is 5*. It is required to set up HP at least
from (3) -> (7-8, either the same value as OD or at least one higher value then OD).
Placement suggestions:
00:05:319 - would be better to place one lower (with grid snap)
00:06:037 - Same situation as before
(00:07:115 - 00:07:295) - The current position for those two objects (circle white tick, circle blue tick) is squishy. I would give some more space for a potential player, while staying with the pattern to move 00:07:115 (with grid snap)
two down and two right. The circle 00:07:295
one down, one right. Something like this:
00:18:882 - Would move the circle (with grid snap)
one right(00:38:822 - 00:38:912, 00:39:091 - 00:39:181) - I think it might be better to move those object (with grid snap) 00:38:822:
two up, 00:38:912:
four up, 00:39:091
two up and lastly 00:39:181:
four up.
(01:07:564 - 01:07:654, 01:07:924 - 01:08:013) - it might be better to move those object (with grid snap) 01:07:564:
one left 01:07:654:
two left, 01:07:924:
two left and lastly 01:07:924:
one left.
(01:47:804 - 01:47:894, 01:48:163 - 01:48:253) - Same situation with the same pattern before, it might be better to move those object (with grid snap) 01:47:804:
two up, 01:47:894
four up, 01:48:073:
four down and lastly 01:48:163:
two down.
(02:10:798 - 02:10:888, 02:11:157 - 02:11:247) - Would move those circles to make pattern more fair (with grid snap of course) 02:10:798:
one up, 02:10:888:
two up, 02:11:157:
one up and lastly 02:11:247:
two up.
Combo suggestions:
01:32:983 - Would place here a new combo to make this part (01:32:983 - 01:33:163) more readible.
01:35:678 - Would be nice to place a new combo here, because the slider from before ended previous combo.
01:55:439 - Not needed so much, but could be better to start a new combo here.
02:01:367 - New combo here.
02:04:241 - The same as before.
02:07:474 - From here, could be started a new combo.
02:32:265 - Not needed but from here could be started a new combo to look a little better :3
Mapping problems:
00:07:385 - I think It's better when there isn't any object on blue tick
(00:09:989 - 00:10:349) - If you want to go with that pattern It's better to move circles (00:10:169 & 00:10:259) one tick like this:
Also with moved objects on a timelapse, there's a need to move objects itself (with grid snap), so 00:10:079:
two left and 00:10:169:
one up, two left.
00:13:133 - Sounds better without the circle on blue tick (00:13:133)
And I think that's all I wanted to point out :P
