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apologies if this feels too nitpicky !!!!i have no
real issues w/ the set but i have suggestions that i think could improve it ^_^
00:36:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - i think this stream would work better if it were more linear and/or jagged, given the sound it's representing
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honestly you could generally just make
00:43:461 - to
00:54:128 - weirder. i think there's a lot of potential in this section for some oddball SV changes + more "unconventional" aim given that it's such a contrast from the rest of the song; the way it is now doesn't necessarily feel
bad but it's kinda boring imo. some examples:
00:44:294 (5,7) - it's a bit strange having these two sliders be different shapes given they're both supposed to represent the same sound imo . i'd
personally recommend making them linear and v-shaped but its entirely up to you
00:48:128 (1,2) - could maybe ctrl+g these individually? i like the awkwardness of how they play when reversed
00:50:628 (7) - could make this slider faster and longer, how you'd want to do that is entirely up to you
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01:06:294 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels a bit strange going into this from
01:05:961 (2) - tbh. you could flip it horizontally, ctrl+g it, and then move it back to its original position; i feel like it's a lot nicer that way
01:15:128 (13) - entirely subjective but i can see there being more emphasis on this object than there is now. maybe a super slow (e.g. 0.25x or something of the sort) 1/2 slider could work?
01:44:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - i dont have anything to mod abt this pattern but it's evil and i love you for that /p