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• Hard (4.64 stars, 453 notes)
  
• Normal (2.84 stars, 285 notes)
  

iSlodinx wrote:

I was telling you not to double-post in forums.

Digitalfear117 wrote:

Normal:
01:27:411 (2) - I think you should change this slider to be like this to flow better

Done

02:23:331 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd like to see 2 moved to be easier to read, kind of like this:


Done

03:07:491 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would adjust these notes to read better, like this:



Done

03:23:811 (3,4) - I told you not to do this on your last Normal. The reverse arrow of 03:23:811 (3) - points the player up, but then the next object is below, this is BAD, please do not do this on your Normal/Easy difficulties. Let's change it to this

Done

Much better normal compared to last time!

Hard:
00:06:291 (1,3) - What are these mapped to? These notes feel really unnecessary. Also you should never have notes before your first timing point. If you want to keep notes before 00:07:011 (4) - , I would only keep 00:06:531 (2) - and if you do keep 00:06:531 (2) - move your timing point back to it.
Done

01:14:691 (1,2,3) - This is a bit messy since they are all different distances away from each other. Spacing them like this will make them consistent

Done

03:14:211 (1) - You should adjust this object slightly to keep the distance consistent

Done

03:18:531 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think this burst is justified, this is supposed to be a calm section, this is too intense
Done

Okay, it's time for the hitsound wallmod. Please check these hitsounds on both difficulties

Normal:
00:07:011 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
00:10:851 - is missing (Whistle, Finish) which exists in Hard
00:14:691 - is missing (Whistle, Finish) which exists in Hard
00:18:531 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
00:19:970 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
00:20:451 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
00:22:371 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
00:26:211 - is missing (Whistle, Finish) which exists in Hard
00:30:051 - is missing (Whistle, Finish) which exists in Hard
00:37:731 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
00:51:650 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
00:57:411 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:01:731 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:02:691 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:03:651 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:04:851 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:15:171 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:19:971 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:21:410 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:23:811 - is missing (Whistle, Finish) which exists in Hard
01:29:090 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
01:30:531 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:46:851 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:51:171 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:52:131 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
01:52:611 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:00:291 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:01:250 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:01:971 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
02:14:451 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:14:931 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:16:611 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
02:17:331 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:21:411 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
02:28:611 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:29:811 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:31:011 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:31:971 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
02:33:891 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:34:131 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:34:371 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:34:851 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
02:36:771 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:18:531 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:19:011 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:19:971 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:20:931 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:21:411 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:21:891 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:22:851 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:23:330 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:23:811 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:24:290 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:24:771 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:25:731 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:26:211 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:35:331 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:40:611 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:41:571 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:44:451 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:45:891 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:47:811 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:48:771 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Hard
03:49:251 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:54:051 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:58:371 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
03:58:851 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Hard
Done

It's best to not put hitsounds on the entire slider (what this means, is don't click the slider one time, and place a hitsound, click a slider part twice to put a hitsound on just one part). All of these sliders have hitsounds on the entire slider:

00:13:731 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:17:571 (7) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:25:251 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:43:491 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:51:171 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:52:131 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:58:851 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:12:051 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:13:011 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:21:891 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:25:731 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:27:411 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:06:771 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:13:491 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:15:411 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:19:251 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:28:851 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:36:771 (6) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:03:651 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:07:491 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:38:211 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:42:051 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:45:891 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:49:731 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:51:651 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
Done

Hard:
00:08:931 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:09:891 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:12:771 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:13:731 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:14:210 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:16:611 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:17:571 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:25:251 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:25:730 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:28:851 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
00:29:091 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
00:29:571 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:39:171 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:41:091 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:48:531 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:49:011 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:54:771 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:55:731 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:56:691 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
00:57:411 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
00:59:811 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:05:331 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
01:13:971 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:14:691 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:18:531 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
01:19:491 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
01:26:451 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:29:331 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:47:331 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
01:48:051 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:50:451 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:51:171 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:52:131 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:54:291 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:57:651 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
01:58:131 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
02:02:691 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
02:05:811 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
02:15:411 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
02:16:131 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
02:20:931 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
02:31:491 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
02:36:771 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:03:651 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:18:531 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:19:011 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:19:491 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:20:451 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:21:411 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:21:891 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:22:371 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:22:851 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:23:330 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:23:811 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:24:290 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:24:771 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:25:731 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:26:211 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:36:291 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:37:251 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:39:651 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:40:131 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:41:091 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:41:571 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
03:45:891 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:46:851 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:47:811 - is missing (Whistle) which exists in Normal
03:56:451 - is missing (Finish) which exists in Normal
Done

00:19:011 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:43:491 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:44:211 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:51:171 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
00:52:131 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:12:051 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:13:011 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:19:971 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:20:931 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:21:891 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:27:411 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:28:371 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:31:491 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:52:611 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
01:53:331 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:00:531 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:01:011 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:13:491 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:14:451 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:17:331 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:19:251 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:28:851 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:29:811 (3) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:30:531 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:34:131 (5) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:34:851 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
02:36:771 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:34:131 (4) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:37:971 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:49:731 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:51:651 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:53:571 (1) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.
03:57:411 (2) - This sliderbody has additions, ensure this is intentional.

ignasblaz1000 wrote:

now. i will wait mods arrived, and beatmap will be ranked.

iSlodinx wrote:

Do you really want to get silenced again for double-posting without any good reason? Please refrain from double-posting, unless you have something important related to the map.

ignasblaz1000 wrote:

no. be good.

Oposh wrote:

Did only Hard, because wasn't expecting it will be so much for modding

00:13:491 - 00:13:731 (2,3) - Honestly would place those two slightly higher than they are currently



Done

00:16:611 - Move slider one to the right.

Done

00:21:411 - 00:22:371 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally this pattern works better when It's more straight forward like this for example:



Done

00:23:811 (1,2) - those sliders can't fully overlap with eachother.

Done

00:27:171 (4) - would be better to move slider one to the right (closer to circle 3).

Done

00:32:691 - 00:32:931 (2,3) - Would be better if circle (2) around the same or slightly higher position towards slider end body



Done

00:43:491 - 00:44:211 (1,2) - Would wiser to place them that way

Done

01:13:971 (6) - move this circle up by one due to changed place on next circle 9

Done

01:14:211 (7) - This circle in my opinion is too near previous one for a Hard difficulty. Please move it slightly far (but not too far)

Done

01:29:331 (4,5,6) - Those circles would work better if they are placed something like this



Done

01:30:051 - move those slightly down to not make it so cramped, because of that change ^

Done

01:37:011 - 01:39:171 (2,3 _ 1,2,3,4 _ 5,6,7) - places of those circles are out of place. Please make pattern less
sharp. Here's how (in my opinion) would be much better:

01:50:211 - It's better to place them futher to the right

Done

01:53:331 - 01:54:531 - Better to place this pattern slightly higher

Done

01:55:731 - 01:56:211 (2,3,4) - Place those circles higher

Done

01:57:651 (5,6,7) - Place them different like this for example:



Done

02:05:331 - 02:06:051 - this whole section would place slightly far away from slider 3

Done

02:15:411 - 02:16:611 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Place pattern somewhere else to not be cluttered

Done

02:17:331 - Lmao? Such slider won't pass by any means. If you want ranked, then change this slider into
something more readable.

Done

02:23:331 (6) - Move slightly down.

Done

02:26:451 - 02:27:171 - Change rotation of circles (4,5,6) to be slightly rounder than it is currently and also move somewhere lower circles (7,8).

Done

02:30:531 - Move slightly nearer sliderend.

Done

03:14:211 - Move this pattern nearer circle (6) that way circle (1) would be near it.

Done

03:23:811 - Fully overlapped would be too confusing. Place it somewhere else nearer sliderend of slider 1 (03:22:851).

Done

03:26:211 (6,7,8) - Place that slightly higher and also maximum to the left.

Done

03:35:571 - 03:39:411 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Place them that way: .
part 2:


Done

part 3:


Done

part 4:


Done

03:49:011 - 03:57:411 - …This whole section needs to get rework.

Done

That's all what I noticed and wanted to point out
Yup It's done.

• 00:16:611 (1,3) - 00:24:291 (2,4) - Would be neater if you can avoid this slider overlap.
  
• 00:44:211 (2,3,4,5) - If you have stacking enabled, you'll understand the overlap is quite messed up. You'll want to move (3,4,5) lower to avoid this issue.
  
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• 01:55:731 (2,3,4) - 02:05:331 (1,2,3) - Spacing could get even within the triple.

• 1. Avoid overlap between objects
  Old styles presents lots of patterns to read, along with your AR7, though having overlaps between objects makes things really messy which you'll want to avoid. Especially along with giant hitbursts, overlaps like 00:08:211 (4,1,2) - 00:48:771 (2,3) - is definitely not something you'll want to do. Try avoid placing objects where you placed right before, and instead go for the empty space for a better readability and a balanced playfield usage.
  
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• 2. Try using similar pattern when the song is similar
  Individual object placements are fine, such as 01:14:691 (1,2,3,4,1) - was pretty cool. Though the whole map was like you were trying something new every time as the song goes, so it was a bit hard to understand how the song was actually composed. You could try using more similar ideas when the song has a similar context, such as 00:07:011 - 00:22:371 - 01:08:451 - 02:09:891 - etc. Currently, everything were expressed as a variation which made the beatmap structure rather loose.

Sonnyc wrote:

Leaving a mod passing by.

Hard:

• 00:16:611 (1,3) - 00:24:291 (2,4) - Would be neater if you can avoid this slider overlap.
  
• 00:44:211 (2,3,4,5) - If you have stacking enabled, you'll understand the overlap is quite messed up. You'll want to move (3,4,5) lower to avoid this issue.
  
  Image

  
  
  
• 01:55:731 (2,3,4) - 02:05:331 (1,2,3) - Spacing could get even within the triple.

Done

Overall it feels like what a real 2009 mapper would made at that time, mainly thanks to the usage of distance snapping. Though spotted 2 issues that you could improve even further to get the best out of the style.

• 1. Avoid overlap between objects
  Old styles presents lots of patterns to read, along with your AR7, though having overlaps between objects makes things really messy which you'll want to avoid. Especially along with giant hitbursts, overlaps like 00:08:211 (4,1,2) - 00:48:771 (2,3) - is definitely not something you'll want to do. Try avoid placing objects where you placed right before, and instead go for the empty space for a better readability and a balanced playfield usage.
  
  Image

  
  
  Done
  
  
• 2. Try using similar pattern when the song is similar
  Individual object placements are fine, such as 01:14:691 (1,2,3,4,1) - was pretty cool. Though the whole map was like you were trying something new every time as the song goes, so it was a bit hard to understand how the song was actually composed. You could try using more similar ideas when the song has a similar context, such as 00:07:011 - 00:22:371 - 01:08:451 - 02:09:891 - etc. Currently, everything were expressed as a variation which made the beatmap structure rather loose.

Done


Hope these helps on your future projects!
I wish you like it.