02:03:065 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think this would sound better as a slider, I think a 5 note burst isn’t really justified here given whats happening in the song here. done
02:45:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This feels overmapped. Why is your most intense rhythming as the kiai ends? The drum doesn’t seem to do this many beats either so what does this follow? in my opinion its to keep the momentum going as it goes into the 1-2 section, nerfed the spacing a little bit.
03:03:848 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why does rhythming become so passive here? It was so active just before and the song hasn’t changed much since then honestly this is mapped back in 2023 when the taylor's version came out and almost everything in the song is so soft and passive than the original version that i kept it passive rhythm when i didn't realize about the 1-2 remapped. This is now thoroughly remapped.
03:27:587 (1,2,3) - Starting here after the break feels very odd and random. Maybe start here? 03:28:892 (1) - Or maybe just map the break, I think that’s better tbh. removed as i feel like its better to just start at 03:28:892 (1)
04:09:848 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don’t think your timing points here work, because if you listen to these notes at 25% they happen too early compared to the sounds they are supposed to represent. Honestly, i agree, but if its okay, if you can probably hear that fade-out at the 04:16:040 it timed perfectly to the 85bpm. Either way i might not change the bpm of it
i can't believe i responded to a 5 month old mod that has been sitting there MENACINGLY
