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• Overload (5.67 stars, 723 notes)
  

laurafied wrote:

sure, im happy~

i assume loved maps dont need modding and technical looks fine, just do all the stuff mentioned above!

Cloudpaw wrote:

Overload
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Missing tag: hiphop
maybe add "kyooti"? do you still go by that yesyes applied both of these

Rhythm

01:46:113 (1,1) - the close spacing implies that it's similar to 01:45:895 (1,1) - in rhythm but it's actually 1/8 later than expected. also [!] 01:46:384 (1) - is actually on the red tick anyway.
instead, maybe try this rhythm. the simplification is easier to read did something a little different that i think works well too

00:47:417 - it makes more sense to map this actively with a circle for the transition into musical break (also the HS is a finish, those generally should be active) yea
[!] 01:03:613 (3) - random overmapped circle, there's nothing in the song to back this up and the spacing to 01:03:721 (4,5) - i guess
00:13:286 (2,3) - slider is better for the vocal rhythm with "of" yea
00:08:504 (3) - two circles instead for active rhythm and contrast? yea
00:32:091 (1,2,3) - i don't really like the 1/8 triple here, i think it's the only one in the entire map yea
02:42:417 (1,2) - replace with 1/4 slider? yea

Composition

[!] 00:33:395 (2,1) - this spacing is REALLY extreme for the rest of the difficulty, it's a 276bpm jump
00:52:417 (1,1,1) - try this, it's symmetrical and puts some emphasis into 00:53:286 - oops

00:09:808 (2,3) - blanket instead? it doesn't really make sense for the spacing to be low for 3 like 00:11:330 (5) - because 3 has an active vocal yea
02:56:982 (1,2) - the overlap looks weird, move 2 a little bit away from the slider body of 1 yea
[!] 03:26:113 (2,3,4) - extremely awkward transition into a massive jump, i suggest just evenly spacing 2-3-4 from each other yea
03:28:613 (1,2,3,1) - the jump is REALLY extreme but you could do something like this instead for W star pattern with the wave slider completing it did this + swapped around 3+4 since it felt awkward to play
02:43:069 (1,2,3,4) - the way 4 overlaps with 1,2 and the slider end is really awkward visually tbh, maybe try putting 02:43:613 (4) - where 02:42:960 (2) - is for the overlap, then you could do a little blanket with 02:43:721 (1) - like this ye n rotated 02:43:286 (3) - a little bit for flow

New combos
they are really all over the place so I'll make a list of all the new combos I made in this .osu #freelabor
broadstrokes: using new combos to primarily separate vocal phrases, removing new combos for pattern clarity - omg thank u a lot for this

Link to the .osu with all new combo changes

Changes

00:07:417 (1) - removed
00:08:504 (1) - added
00:30:678 (3) - removed
00:31:547 (5) - removed
00:32:634 (1) - removed
00:33:939 (2) - removed
00:41:330 (1) - added
01:00:026 (3) - removed
01:00:460 (2) - removed
01:00:678 (3) - removed
01:00:895 (4) - removed
01:02:852 (1) - added
01:03:721 (5) - added
01:03:939 (3) - removed
01:06:330 (5) - added
01:06:656 (2) - removed
01:12:960 (2) - removed
01:13:286 (3) - removed
01:45:895 (1,2,3,4) - removed (but also check above mods)
01:46:982 (2) - removed
01:49:591 (5) - removed
01:50:026 (1) - added
01:50:460 (2) - removed
02:07:852 (2) - removed
02:27:743 (2) - removed
02:29:156 (2,3,4) - removed
02:32:417 (1) - added
02:32:634 (5) - removed
02:41:656 (2) - removed
02:41:982 (3) - removed
02:43:721 (1) - removed
03:28:613 (2) - removed

02:13:649 (1,1,1) - i would remove this for pattern clarity with the followpoints, otherwise it's confusing to read for the first time yea

this is a pretty fun map ^_^ i do have some more concerns about how some patterns are structured for visual clarity and play feel, but i don't want to overwhelm you with a million things at once