alright i'll bite this map.
[General]
your map background is kinda low quality, i've provided a betterer quality background for this
https://ilxia.s-ul.eu/qsdoEsleaudio is okay, but i'd suggest to make it a tad bit better from this, i've provided a good quality of this
https://ilxia.s-ul.eu/CN8p8DxZ[Hard]
00:33:129 (5) - nc
00:38:522 (1) - would it be better for ctrl+g and nc this
00:41:219 (5,6,7) - this doesn't really follow anything i would suggest making these as like 1/2 sliders

00:43:916 (1) - nc
00:46:612 (1) - nc and remove nc on 00:47:961 (1)
01:05:376 (1) - nc
01:08:073 - might as well add a circle here since there's a noticeable beat

01:10:770 - same here as above

01:31:444 (4) - move this down to x:368 y:352
[I'm so mature]
00:17:511 - add a circle here

00:24:927 (4) - would suggest to shorten the sliderend by a tick and add a circle to it the next kind of like this

00:26:275 (1) - would probably remove nc on this and nc 00:26:387 (2) this instead
00:34:477 (7) - nc
00:37:174 (5) - nc
00:39:871 (4) - nc
00:42:455 - would suggest add a circle to this

00:45:152 (5,6) - why not just move them to x:429 y:189?
00:45:938 (7) - this rhythm is so passive, my suggestion is to remove the reverse slider, add 2 circles on 00:46:500 and do some nc thingamajig like this image

01:14:814 (1) - no noticeable rhythm here, would suggest to move this to the white tick, shorten the sliderend by a tick, and a circle behind it like this

01:15:601 (2,3,4,5) - why not just make them 1,1,1,1 since they're on a different time signature anyway
01:29:758 (8) - nc
01:29:758 (8) - nc
01:35:152 (1,2) - these look kinda passive, it needs more spice to it, would suggest to add some rhythms to it like this

01:40:545 (3) - nc
01:45:938 (1,2) - same here as last time, needs more spice

01:56:725 (7) - nc
01:58:073 (10) - nc
02:00:770 (6) - nc
02:06:387 - add circle to this beat

02:20:208 - suggestion to add a circle here

02:29:084 (8) - nc