Really glad to see you quickly improve in mapping! Here are some mods:
00:40:590 (6,7) - Not sure why the rhythm here doesn't follow the vocals like the rest of what you mapped in this section. You should alter the rhythm so it looks like this:
01:56:072 (5,6,7) - Shouldn't probably have this spaced away from (4), move this pattern x:336 y:272. Here's what it should look like in case my instructions are unclear:
02:18:080 (1) - Should mode this hitcircle x:256 because I'm not too fond of how it flows currently
02:24:258 (1,2) - Any reason why (2) is not stacked on (1)'s slidertail? idk to me it just looks weird
02:46:844 (6) - Would probably move this x:64 y:208, a little further away from
02:47:037 (1)02:51:960 (8,9) - Move these down 1 pixel, something like this would be perfect:
03:16:574 (4,5,6) - This looks a little too wonky. Would consider moving (5) to x:104 y:120