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• Hard (3.68 stars, 531 notes)
  
• Normal (2.29 stars, 254 notes)
  
• You Drive Me Crazy! (4.22 stars, 633 notes)
  

vyper wrote:

Finally got myself to mod your beatmap since I like this song.
Minor mods for now. There's probably a lot more that needs to be pointed out but here's what I got so far.
modded in lithuanian:

General / Generolas

Šis sunkumas pavadinimas „You Drive Me Like A Crazy!“ neturi daug prasmės. Jį reikėtų pervadinti į „You Drive Me Crazy!“.
This difficulty title "You Drive Me Like A Crazy!" doesn't make much sense. It should be renamed "You Drive Me Crazy!"
00:48:548 Čia nustatyčiau preview point. Manau, kad tai daug labiau paveiku nei tas, kurį dabar esi nustatęs. pasikeite
I would set a preview point here. I think it's much more impactful than the one you've set now.

You Drive Me Like A Crazy!

00:31:077 (1) - gal perkelti tai į x:48 y:176? padaryta
maybe move this to x:48 y:176?
00:43:430 (1,2) - Šie du slankikliai nepatogiai persidengia. Antrąjį slankiklį reikia šiek tiek pastumti į kairę. padaryta
These two sliders overlap awkwardly. The second slider needs to be moved slightly to the left.
00:45:725 (4,5) - Perkelkite šį raštą taip, kad 4 nepersidengtų su slankiklio korpusu padaryta
Move this pattern so that 4 does not overlap with the slider body
01:39:901 - 01:42:725 Kodėl ši dalis lėta? Nėra jokių instrumentų pauzių ar kažko panašaus, ir apskritai tai skamba keistai. padaryta
Why is this part slow? There are no instrumental pauses or anything like that, and it just sounds weird overall.
02:27:195 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Man visiškai nepatinka, kaip šis grojimas vyksta. Norėčiau naudoti kitokį metodą, kad šis raštas neatrodytų nepatogus grojant. padaryta
I don't like the way this is played at all. I would like to use a different approach so that this pattern doesn't seem awkward to play.
02:55:430 (3,1,2) - Sąžiningai, manau, kad tai turėtų būti patogiau žaisti. Kažkas panašaus būtų gerai: padaryta
Honestly, I think this should be more comfortable to play. Something like this would be good

03:23:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Šį penkiakampį tikrai reikėtų nupoliruoti, tikriausiai jis atrodytų šitaip: padaryta
This pentagon really needs polishing, it should probably look like this:

SCAG wrote:

brigada scag



modifikacijos išverstos naudojant DeepL, atsiprašau, jei tekstas parašytas keistai
mods translated using DeepL, i apologise if it's written strangely

Normal

00:20:842 (1) - manau, kad tai turėtų atrodyti taip, kaip pateiktame paveikslėlyje. Taip bus išvengta sutapimo su 00:20:313 (5,6) - padariau.
i think this should look how it does in the provided image. this is so it doesn't have an overlap with 00:20:313 (5,6) - padariau.


00:43:430 (3) - padariau
perfect curve, should be changed

beatmapoje yra daug perfect curve ir būtų pernelyg sudėtinga juos visus išvardyti. galite konvertuoti juos į DigitalClient
arba paversti juos beziers - suprantu
there are perfect curves all across this map and it'd be too much effort to list them all. you can convert them in Digital Client or just make them beziers

01:03:548 (1) - padariau 01:05:313 (2,3,4) - padariau.
perfect curve, but i also suggest changing it a bit either way so that it's not overlapping with 01:05:313 (2,3,4) -.

02:54:725 (2) - padariau 02:53:313 (1) - padariau 02:54:725 (2) - padariau
this overlaps with 02:53:313 (1) - . i think this should be reworked a little so that everything fits nicely. maybe 02:53:313 (1) - should point downwards? after that, CTRL+H 02:54:725 (2) - and adjust them so they dont overlap

Hard

sąžiningai sakau, man šis tikrai patinka! jis gerai padarytas ir manau, kad neturiu daug ką apie jį pasakyti. esu sužavėtas Aciu!

You Drive Me Crazy!

00:29:842 (2) - padariau
move down 1 grid to avoid overlap

00:57:548 (1,2) - padariau
i think these sliders are too oddly-shaped in comparison to almost everything else. i recommend doing something like in the image


01:45:372 (4) -padariau
move this to the centre of the grid (x:256, y:192) so that the stacked circles are less awkward

02:07:607 (1,2) - padariau
replace this with 4 circles in an upward linear motion. it aligns better with the song, and it highlights the vocals a lot more


03:03:548 (5,6) - padariau
move these so they look the way they do in the image


03:03:901 (7) - padariau