I'M SO ORANGE…00:24:026 - there could be an object somewhere at this timestamp to act as filler rhythm - would make things feel a lot more smooth. perhaps on the tail of
00:22:359 (3) - ?
another idea is to remove the reverse on
00:23:359 (4) - and then add a 1/1 slider after it, something like this
00:28:693 (2,3,4) - space these out more maybe? feels a bit awkward atm
00:28:859 (3,4) - i'd also recommend Ctrl+G'ing these so that it feels nicer to play, keeping the counterclockwise flow established by
00:28:359 (1) - .
00:29:359 - once again theres good potential for a filler rhythm object here
00:30:359 (1,2) - i like this. no mod here, i just wanted to point that out.
<300:31:693 (3) - i think this slider could be done a little differently so that it flows better with the previous 2 objects… a simple Ctrl+J would work @ the bare minimum
00:52:359 (1) - not totally sure how to feel abt this slider but i'll allow it LOL
00:59:026 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+J and move to the left a bit so that it feels and looks nicer going into
00:59:526 (4,5,6) - . this is subjective tho
01:06:693 (4) - i'd say remove the 4th reverse on this slider, feels a bit disorienting going from it to the next circle
01:09:026 (1) - the emptiness from here to the next object feels a bit strange given how much is happening in the song during it… would recommend putting something here? up to you
01:36:693 (1) - not sure why this is NC'd, i would remove it personally
01:37:693 (5) - add NC ?
01:37:859 (1) - remove NC ? neither of these are required, just looks nicer 2 me
lowkey think you couldve gone a bit harder during the kiai but idm how it is at the moment.
overall, i do want to give a bit of advice, and that is to think more about how you can polish out your maps. try to think of ways to make things look nicer, ways to organise objects in a way that makes the map feel more complete - as opposed to a bunch of haphazard ideas - etc etc
i like what you have! i just think it's important for you (and any mapper) to think a bit more about how each object relates to each other
and i do think you did this very well from
00:37:359 (1) - to
00:57:693 (1) - , everything in this snippet feels very well put-together
good stuff homie o7
okay so i love this but lowkey there are some really questionable rhythm decisions that i don't really expect from mappers with your kind of experience (i.e. a lot. you're a good mapper)
there are a lot of scenarios where you put very defined sounds in the song on slider ends. there's no real impact and it just kinda feels clunky?
00:24:859 (4) - is the first example of this. for this pattern i'd personally suggest something like this: (3, 4) is a 1/2 stack, and then the slider is moved over to (5) - with its reverse removed ofc
i apologise if this comes off as me telling you how to map; i just like offering alternatives to make things a bit less hard on the people whose maps i mod
00:25:359 (6,7,8,9) - this feels very clunky rhythm-wise as well. it's symmetry for the sake of symmetry and i think this can be executed better
i can forgive the sounds on sliderends in the 2nd iteration of the song's verse (starting at
00:37:359 - ) because i see it as a building of the verse more than anything. it's variation and that's Fun
01:20:359 (1) - i find it strange that this is a slider. every other time this part of the kiai is mapped, it's represented with 2 circles; it feels more natural that way imo. i would just make this 2 circles lol
01:28:359 (1) - same with this. it just feels kinda arbitrary. maybe u could ctrl+shift+f this so that it's just circles on the head and tail of the slider?
