00:49:046 (1) - just move this to x:49 y:20
00:53:638 (1) - this is fine, but I would rather just make it a full jump for consistency because you make it a full jump on
01:03:434 (1,2)01:11:087 - please map the break if you don't bother to map the intro theres a lot of wasted rhythms to place there too
01:57:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE, why is it so passive?!?!?!?!, the vocals here is already been intensified so there's like absolute NO REASON to make this even more active + spacing
02:19:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this buildup is so strong yet you made it even weaker, this needs to be a proper jump
02:35:883 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this spacing needs to be buffed man, what the helly
02:40:475 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - this is just bad, it is hittable and playable but this just plays ass in my honest opinion
02:58:689 - Slider tail is offscreen.
some map takes
1. Why you didn't map the intro, i understand the 30s but bruh the intro is so mappable (even the first ranked / loved map of this has the intro, i don't get it)
2. from
02:41:699 until the end you just decided to map the vocals except i find it kind of sad that from this part, its practically just passive rhythms you need more active rhythms for this man
i love this song but i can't guarantee for a nomination