scag brigade
[ GENERAL ]02:46:758 - new uninherited timing point, same BPM
timing seems fine enough other than that
[ Mr Blonde ]there are too many instances in this diff for me to individually point out, but the spacing is very inconsistent. not only does it make certain patterns look sloppy (take for instance
00:41:021 (3,4,5) - being unevenly spaced) but it also may be misleading to newer players. i recommend using distance snap 1.2x throughout the map; touch up on whatever you can and i'll let you know if theres anything else
new combos:
00:11:480 (1) - remove new combo,
00:12:450 (3) - add new combo
00:19:246 (1) - remove new combo,
00:20:205 (2) - add new combo
00:25:527 (1) - remove new combo,
00:27:463 (3) - add new combo
00:31:575 (5) - add new combo
01:32:486 (1) - remove new combo,
01:34:181 (3) - add new combo
mods:
00:43:456 (1,2) - overlaps like this are very VERY discouraged in lower diffs. i'd recommend maybe moving
00:45:150 (2,3) - to the right of
00:43:456 (1) - and then adjusting patterns until it starts matching back up with the map
00:47:085 (6) - this slider rules but i'm not sure if it's too visually confusing for a newer player. i'd recommend making it more linear, without the reverse so that you can represent the vocals at
00:48:295 - with a circle or two. additionally, make it a new combo
01:18:923 (1) - not sure why there's a second spinner here when there isn't one in the top diff?
01:46:049 (1,2) - i see where you're going with this but i think it'd be better if these weren't as oddly shaped. maybe a simple ~ slider design could work? make sure they don't overlap too
02:13:366 (1) - move 1/2 to the left, onto the white tick. make it end on
02:16:021 - so there's more time between the spinner and the slider after it
02:33:469 - break time here maybe?
02:43:594 (1) - i dont think there should be a spinner here - there's enough going on in the song to be represented with a couple of simple sliders, maybe
02:45:306 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - really unsure how i feel about the way this section is mapped. the 2/1 sliders really don't work well, especially because – for previous iterations of this part of the song – you seem to map it more comprehensively. i'd honestly recommend remapping it more than anything
03:11:971 - i'd recommend mapping this part like this:

[ Mr Pink ]overall pretty good, just some adjustments to patterns that i feel are beneficial for the map
new combos:
01:38:056 (6) - remove new combo,
01:38:783 (1) - add new combo
02:20:864 (7) - add new combo,
02:21:832 (1) - remove new combo
02:22:801 (4) - add new combo,
02:23:769 (1) - remove new combo
03:19:736 (5) - add new combo maybe?
mods:
00:21:172 (5) - move up to x:176 y:112 so it aligns better with the rest of the pattern
00:41:022 (5,6) - move to make something like this screenshot, just looks better visually
00:46:359 (1,2,3) - you could be doing a lot more with these stacked patterns, maybe something like this?
00:58:214 (6,7,8) - maybe do something like this here. completely up to you, i just feel like having them spaced out more fits well
01:06:695 (4) - move to the right to form a triangle with the heads of (2) and (3)
01:34:423 (4) - i think here, something like this would work better, with (6) being ctrl+g'd, and (7) being in the same position as (5)
01:43:869 (7) - i don't think this is allowed, sadly. maybe a linear slider going down would work, with some repositioning. lmk what you come up with
03:02:722 (4,5,6) - this should be a stack of 5 to keep up with the pattern