Some rhythm mods from me:
01:12:070 (1) - I think I would shorten this slider to
01:12:414, imo the sound at
01:12:414 is too prominent to completely ignore like you do right now.
01:22:759 (3) - I thought I would remove this circle to create more contrast between the intense and softer sections in the intro of this song. Then you could new combo
01:23:103.
01:25:517 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This section is very awkward in rhythming. I would delete
01:25:517 (1,2), remove
01:26:207 (3) - and instead have two circles at
01:26:207 and
01:26:552. Then delete
01:26:897 (4,5) - and instead have a slider from
01:26:897 to
01:27:241.
01:28:276 (2) - Then you could delete this circle
01:29:655 (5) - This is too passive imo, you should represent the vocals here instead of just covering them up with this big slider.
This vocal is very prominent and should be active with the start of a slider or a circle at
01:31:03501:36:552 (2) - I would end this slider at
01:36:983, and then add a circle at
01:37:586 (3) -
01:41:379 (2) - Maybe delete this slider, and have
01:40:690 (1) - extend to
01:41:72402:41:354 (1) - This would be better as two sliders imo, one from
02:41:354 to
02:41:785, and then a second from
02:41:871 to
02:42:21602:46:871 (6,7) - Move 6 to
02:47:042, 7 to
02:47:386, then add a circle at
02:46:871.
03:15:004 (3) - I would change this reverse arrow to repeat at
03:15:348, and end at
03:15:693, then you can put a slider from
03:15:866 to
03:16:210.
04:07:743 We don't want this sound to be passive. Let's put a circle at
04:07:570, then put a slider from
04:07:743 to
04:07:91504:10:157 (1) - Shorten this slider so it ends at
04:10:329, then put a circle at
04:10:501I would delete the circle at
04:11:175 (6), then move the slider at
04:11:343 (1) - to
04:11:175. Then give that slider a reverse arrow.
04:11:849 (3,4,5) - I think you should delete these, and instead have this be a slider from
04:11:849 to
04:12:193, so that the gap at
04:12:366 makes more sense.
04:16:331 (5) - Maybe make this slider end at
04:16:676, and give it a reverse arrow so we can catch the sound at
04:16:676.

I don't like that the sound at
04:19:435 is completely passive, let's put a circle at
04:19:262, and have a slider from
04:19:435 to
04:19:607I think these three circles at
04:20:814 (5,6,7) - should just be a slider from
04:20:814 to
04:21:159.
04:24:262 not representing this sound is kind of weird… but I think it will mess up what you are going for so idk lol.
04:39:426 (1,2,3) - It's a bit odd to me that these sounds all represented with these sliders instead of circles… it feels really passive. But I also don't hate it, so idk just something for you to think about.
04:42:876 (1) - I would end this slider at
04:43:220, then put a circle at
04:43:393, delete
04:44:082 (3) - and instead extend
04:43:565 (2) - to end at
04:44:427
05:00:634 (4) - I would make this a circle, and have a slider from
05:00:807 to
05:01:15105:07:703 (7) - I would make this slider end at
05:08:048, then make it a reverse arrow so it ends at
05:08:39305:13:220 (4) - This slider should end at
05:13:910, and then put a circle at
05:14:25506:23:335 (5) - I would have a slider from
06:23:335 to
06:23:508, then a slider from
06:23:680 to
06:24:02506:56:784 (8) - Don't apply the whistle to the entire slider here, it's really noticeable.